9/15/10

So, today we went over revising our papers, and making corrections. It was helpful because it gave us a list of questions to answer to make sure our paper was good. Anyways, I spent the class time doing research on the causes of diabetes, so next class period I'll start on the actual paper. Dr. Rivera sent me her corrections for my descriptive paper, and I'm glad she said that i was descriptive! So I just need to do a few corrections and I'm done!