Sept 29, 2010

Hafa Adai All,
We worked on our Editorials today, but Dr. Rivera was feeling nice and she extended the turn in date to next week. Also, I saw my teacher edit today, for my informative essay "It didn't look too bad". :D. Well until next time.. 

29Sept10

Today, I just found out that I have to redo my expository essay. I am a little disappointed about it, but at least I am able to use it for the narrative essay. Some of us brought our editorials. Everyone mostly got theirs off of the internet. So far, I still need to complete my second essay. I need to restart the first essay. Then I need to start on the editorial. Lots of work! Hopefully I finish everything in a timely manner.

9/29

Happy Wednesday! Today we went over our editorial articles that we brought in. I'm excited to start on my own but I'm not sure yet what topic I want to talk about. But as of now, I have to finish off my informative essay on "Driving under the influence." I know I won't be able to finish my rough draft in class so I would have to take it home and finish it up. Hurray for homework!

9/29/10

Today we went over editorials and Dr. Rivera asked us to come up with our own editorial. I have no idea what I'm going to write about. It's going to have to wait for the weekend because I'm having a really hard time on finishing my essay. My topic is fairly easy, but for some reason it's just not coming to me. Words need to start flowing because the essay due date is coming up quickly.

A Day of Learning

Today, in my English writing class we learn a little something about editorials. I'm not really sure what it will consist of but I think that I am going to have to due a lot of researching. Today I also did some more writing on my essay. I hope to have both my essay and editorial papers finished by Saturday or Sunday. Well that's how my day of learning in class went. See you later!

Well since I missed the last class I'm still working on my 2nd essay. I did some brainstorming and researching today. I decided to write about Teen Pregnancy. I've been reading all about it I can't believe how much the teen pregnancy rate has gone up. I need to finish my brainstorming, and class is almost over.

I thought I would be lost due to the fact that I missed last class, but it seemed that I didn't. We had to search for an editorial to help us with the editorial we needed to turn in next week. Besides that, we kept working on our second essay. I'm not quite done, but I'm almost there. Hopefully I finish my essay this weekend so I can work on my editorial. Till next time blog!

Tonight , we talked about writing a editorial article. Each person has to write about their own article about something. I always have hard time to picking up a topic. I need at least one week to think, but the time is something that I don't have. I'll probably go on line and look at some of the articles and either to copy the whole thing or modify some of the wordings. Wow, today is Wednesday, that means we don't have a class until next Monday. OUTSTANDING!!

09.29.10

Today, we discussed our editorials. Also, I learned I turned my essay into a narrative essay. Which means I have to redo it. It's okay because I decided to change my topic to "The Great Depression". Hopefully, I finish my essay before it's due next week. Wish me luck!

092910 (:

Today was a great day. We did an editorial activity today and I finish my 2nd essay. Well hopefully. Haha. I got a little confused on what were suppose to do for the editorial but I got it now. Lol. Well have a great weekend everyone and see you all on monday! :D

The What?

Well since I was absent last class, I was lost for a whole half hour in the class. We discussed the editorial, and now we have to write one that is due at Wednesday. I have no idea what to write about Guam. Can someone please brain storm for me? Dr. Rivera also read my essay to check if I have to make another one. Thank goodness that I was on the right track.

Class today was great. We talked about our expository essays, and talked a bit about editorial as well. Even though I thought I would be finished with the expository essay. It turns out I made it into a narrative essay instead, which of course is still fine. It's an essay completed in advance. So now I'm just gonna work on my expository essay. Be safe classmates and see you all next week!

September 27, 2010

Today, was an exhausting  day for me. Work was hectic then driving to school traffic was crazy, then trying to find parking was frustrating. But overall class was okay, we continued our informative essay plus we had our one to one evaluation with Dr. Rivera. So until next time...

9/27/10

Today we had a teacher-student conference, and my meeting with Dr. Rivera went well. So far I am doing really well in class, but I can still make room for improvements. I guess I just have to try a little bit harder. Anyways, I continued on my informative essay, and I made some progress. My essay is now a paragraph long! I now have a better idea on how I would like my essay to be, so it's a little bit easier writing the rest of the essay. Hopefully, next class meeting I'll be able to write at least half of my essay.

Tonight, we had teacher and student conference. So far, I'm doing ok but need to work little more harder. I barely passed the first sert exam, and I'm hoping to bring the score up. Other than that, the night went pretty smooth. Well until next time, later

Monday, 9/27/10

Today I had a one to one conference with Dr. Rivera. She showed us our practice test that we took a couple of week ago. I didn't do that bad. I just wish I did better! I'm so stumped with ideas for my expository essay. I'm thinking of changing my topic. There isn't much information online and a lot of my essay idea's are just from brainstorming on my own. Hopefully things turn out in the end.

9/27/10

Well today was a pretty alright day. We had the teacher student conference and I need to make some improvements. I hope by the end of the semester my grade for the sert test goes up.

Tonight we talked about expository essay .I feel alot better after talking with the teacher on the best way to write the essay. I can't wait to start writing for the next project, it's going to be interesting.

9.27.10

Today is conference day. Just finished my conference, and I was told that I am doing a good job. And I get to start on my third essay since I am waiting on my edits from Dr. Rivera, I don't know what I'm going to write about just yet.

Today went well! Dr. Rivera went ahead and lent me a copy of an informative essay, so I could use it as a guide line. I hope it helps me out better my writing skills. Not to mention I got a C grade for my practice SERT exam. Dr. Rivera said that I passed it and I need to work on my subject verb agreement. Anyways I feel a lot better than the last class time. Last class I felt like quitting because I didn't have a clue how I was going to start my essay. Today I change my old introduction after looking at some of the sample essays Dr. Rivera showed us. Now that I have a tutor I could ask questions if I get lost on some things... Well nothing else to do now but write, write and write some more... See you all later!

We have a conferencing going on, while I'm trying to edit my 2nd essay. Just waiting here to be called by Dr. Rivera. I keep on yawning, the air-con really makes me sleepy. So far the class is all good.

Monday Monday Monday

It's Monday again! We're doing our conference right now (teacher-student), I'm still waiting for my turn and see what Dr. Rivera has to say. Well I did my 2nd essay already. I did a paper talking about the importance of personal hygiene. It's not bad, I find it pretty interesting. Oh well, don't forget the editorial on Wednesday guys! Adios. :)

September 22, 2010

Yet again, another school day! With an interesting start Dr. Rivera informed me, she only allows 3 absences. Anyways today went well, I was able to catch up with the rest of the class because I started on my second essay last week, I thought I was going to fall behind because of the two days I missed. Well until next time...

9/22/10

Today was suppose to be the first time we start working on our second essays, but a few of us have already started. So far I'm having a hard time trying to figure out what to write. Every time I type something it feels as if I'm copying it from the articles I have, so I have to erase the whole sentence and think on how to word it so that it's my own. I have a general idea of what i want on my essay and how where things go, its the finding words that is a problem. I hope it gets easier as time passes by.

Today was pretty slow for me, but i enjoyed every moment of it. i'm just about done with my second essay. cant wait for the next. i hope your all doing well with your essays. have a great weekend, and be safe.

Trouble, Trouble,Trouble.

Wow! I 'm really having trouble putting together my 2nd paper. I'm try to attach some of my subtopic with what I found in the my site, and I can't seem to do just that.Also I have a headache and I starting to feel like I want to give up and leave this class. To tell you the truth I never really felt as stupid, until i've started this second paper. Anyways I got to go write on other people's blogs, so I'll write you all later.

9/22

Today was a very interesting day. I finally started on my second essay. This classes is getting more interesting to me. I am learning more about writing then i had thought of. I hope i am doing well in class. Today was also a quiet evening. Well have a great weekend everyone!! See you on Monday.

09/22/2010

Class went pretty smooth tonight. When I got in, all I did was work on my second essay. I finished with my introduction, but still on the verge of doing the rest. Although, I am glad I found a topic! It took me a while, but I came up with one. Hopefully i get to finish it by this week. I hope with my work and gym, I wouldn't get carried away. Until next time blog!

Finally and finally, I'm done with my first essay. I'm guessing I'm one of the slowest person writing an essay. My second essay is coming along well. I mostly copying from the aticle and I hope Dr. Rivera doesn't say much. Well it's the weekend, enjoy your weekend.

9.22.2010

Today, I continued on my second paper. Edited another paper, re-edited my paper yet again. And currently, I am about to e-mail my draft to Dr. Rivera. Hopefully it does not need much revisions. That is pretty much it with what I did today. Have a great weekend everyone. :)

22Sept10

Today we continued working on our informative essay. Ms. Rivera had sent my draft for my descriptive essay. I needed to make the final corrections and turn it in. I had finished all the corrections, saved it, and sent it to my email. When I checked my email, for some reason it didn't save properly. So had to redo it. I made sure I didn't screw that up again. Finally, I turned it in and I'm going to start continuing on my second essay.

Narrative

Today was a bit different for me. I did not have my USB. I left it to my last work. Well today I read the narrative essay. It sound pretty easy that means I am about to mess this one up. But the best part of this essay is I can make a fiction narration of something that never exists

Hello Again (:

Well today went by pretty fast, probably because I was late for class. Haha. Well Dr. Rivera said it was ok for us because we were here ever since we just didnt know if our teacher was here because my classmate said there was a sign on the door to go to another room. So I just followed him .Haha. And to top off this amazing day was that I accidentally forgot my flash drive in my laptop -___-Woohoo. And I was almost finish with my first draft. Well I guess that's it for today, take cares! (:

9/20/10

Today was the last day to submit our descriptive essay. I finished making the corrections on mine so I'm happy! I'm slowly adding onto my Informative essay about the causes of Diabetes. It's coming along slowly, but at least I'm getting somewhere so that's good.

Is it just me or are the chairs in this class super uncomfortable? Just a random thought...Well hope everyone has a nice day!

sept 20 2010

finally finished my essay .Tonight we talked about another topic expository essay it sounds like one of those lab reports you get at the hospital scary,but I think it's going to be interesting.Im not quite sure what to write about anyways I'll figure it out

its good to be back!!

Alright lets do this....ok got my first essay out of the way and moving to the next one,I am going write about Abortion. Yeah I know that's going to be hard to write about but hey I'll give it a shot. overall class is good and good to be back and out of my bed! and now time to think....hmmm????

9/20

Today we had to submit our final draft. Don't know what topic i will use for my expository essay. Might consider construction traffic in between  route 8,10, and 16. Well i gotta choose something soon. Class is going by too fast to me. Only if I had a little more time, in my free time to actually stop and think about my assignments. Well best of luck to everyone and their essay!!

Wow, today went by quick. I started working on my second essay. Still waiting for Dr. Rivera to give me back my first one. I'm hoping she doesn't destroy me that bad. I'm really suck on writing, I mostly write the way I speak. Well except I don't use the curse words in writing. Anyway, for the second essay, I'm writing about sushi, even though I really don't like fishes. The only raw fish I could eat is tuna and maybe salmon depends on my mood of that day. Well anyway, it's time to go.

Today Class

Today in class, I started my second essay. My topic is on beer. I think that my essay is going alright so far, but I only got as far as my introduction. I am also thinking that I might have a little problem making a good introduction. well anyways my essay is not due for a couple of days, so I have the time to figure it out... wish me luck people!

Finally!

Today we just checked our calendar then Dr. Rivera let us do our first draft for whole class. I just got done with my First essay! Party to night in my house! Well lan party anyway. I finally decided a topic for my new essay. I was going to pick "monkey" but I just ended up with platypus because they are more interesting for my perspective. Good night all and do not drown in a rain for this incoming typhoon.

9.20.10

Today went by really fast at least to me it did. I printed out my final draft for paper number one. Finished up my first draft for paper number two. I also, was researching some information on my topic. I printed out my first draft so I can re-read it, to see if I had any errors. After that I re-edited my paper and that is pretty much it. :)

20Sept10

Today, our final draft is due. I had turned in mine last night. Hopefully it's not that bad.. We also had to provide our topic for our expository essay. I hope I don't have to change mine. It seems to be going well so far.

9/20/2010

Basically all we did today was finish up our first paper, and start on our second. As for me, i am still waiting for Dr. Rivera's revision. I was stressing out at first because i still had to finalize my first essay, and i was completely blank with what i wanted to write about my second. However, i'm glad i thought of something to write about and started to brainstorm on it. Basically, today was pretty productive to me. Till next time....

hello there bloggers...

Well today I started on my informative essay and I'm not quite sure my topic is all that great. Oh well, i can always choose another topic but then I would have to start all over again. Gosh, this keyboard is hard to type on, I have to keep backspacing because it doesn't capitalize my letters and I always have to press down hard on the keyboard to make the letters come onto the screen. Well until next class, see you later bloggers (:

number 9

Hello number 9! I'm feeling pretty good today! oOooh YEEeaH! Haha! I had some KFC chicken earlier before i went into class. It was so good! I haven't had that in awhile. Anyways, today was alright. I am still working on my draft. This topic "Buying and Selling" is not an easy topic to write about. Haha! Well, class is almost over. Time to comment people. Thank you, Come again!

Continuing my essay

Today we're continuing our second essays. I'm still not a hundred percent sure that the topic I have chosen is something I really want to write about. It is a topic that I find very interesting and grown to love but I still do not feel strongly about it. Until I do figure it out, I will be back to fill out another blog.

Class was great! i went over a classmates draft, it was about a beach in hawaii, perfect draft. ok, so im currently working on my informative essay. found the perfect topic, atleast to me it is.

9/15/10

So, today we went over revising our papers, and making corrections. It was helpful because it gave us a list of questions to answer to make sure our paper was good. Anyways, I spent the class time doing research on the causes of diabetes, so next class period I'll start on the actual paper. Dr. Rivera sent me her corrections for my descriptive paper, and I'm glad she said that i was descriptive! So I just need to do a few corrections and I'm done!

Lost And Must Be Found

Today we discussed the some new way to correct our essay. I also decided that I need to change my topic. The last topic is too much trouble when it comes to giving the facts.,

We discussed about Revising and Editing. Then started to do our 2nd draft. Overall the class was good.

Title Trouble

I am having trouble with what to use as my title, mainly because their are no proven fact on Alcohol. I thinking that it might be better if I change it. I really don't like the hassle of all the research I have to do before I find something to write about.

What did I do today? Oh, I was trying to finalyze my first essay and tried to find a topic for my second essay. While I was trying to finalyze my essay, I didn't like what I wrote, so I started to redo the whole essay again, but I realized that, it's going to take a long time. So I decided to stick with the one I got and I'm going to let Dr. Rivera to be a judge. And topic for the second essay, I still don't have one yet. If I leave without telling Dr. Rivera, I'm sure I'm going to hear about it. Maybe I just write down something and next meeting when I come, I just change it. Have a nice weekend.

editing

Tonight in class finally finish my essay and we talkrd about editing and revising learning alot about writing . How you talk and how you put it on paper are two different things .I fine it very interesting ,this class is going to fun for me .

number 8

I finally have a topic for my informative essay! My topic is, "Buying and Selling". What do you think about that? Huh? Haha! I am hungry! After this class, I'm going to head down to the BCS Cafe' to get some food to eat! Maybe some Mongolian Beef! YUMMY! This is my blog number 8, I'll see you Number 9. Haha!

9/15/2010

Today, we reviewed "Revising and Editing" it was quick, after that I tried to finish up my informative essay. Our second essay but my head wasn't really in it today. So hopefully I will finish it up tomorrow after work or tonight before I go to work. Also, I got my revisions back today from my descriptive draft so that means I'm done with my first essay!

Revising and Editing...9/15/2010

Today we read as a class about revising and editing. Some of us already started on our next essay. I just sent my first essay to Dr. Rivera for her to edit it so that I can finalize it. Now i'm trying to think of a topic for my next essay. I still can't make up my mind of what I want to write about. Still going to think about it and by next class I'll know.

09/15/2010

Dr. Rivera got the whole class reading a link to "Revising and Editing". Although, the only thing in m head is turning in my descriptive essay. I feel so delayed! Next, she got us working on our second essay which is our informative essay (expository essay). I have yet to find a topic and have yet to start. Gosh, with work and school, i need a miracle! Hopefully i get a lot of things done over the weekend.

Wednesday 5 15 10

What we did today is we went over on how to edit and revise our paper and now were working on our 2nd essay. We didnt really do much today and it was pretty quite in class. So that's it for now! haha see you next week (:

9/15

Today we read about revising and Editing. i have to leave early due to the fact i work at 7pm-3am. My days get more tiring everyday. I am trying to accomplish what is necessary for my future. Good Luck everyone!!

I finally finished the revisions on my draft. I'm done with that, and now I'm moving on with the next. For the Narrative Essay, I'm still undecided with a topic. I'm going to work on it at home. Overall, class was great!

Monday, September 13, 2010

I finally came to class early for change! Anyways, we went over controlling ideas and how to organize and support them. We each read a paragraph and Dr. Rivera explained each paragraph a little bit. She then told us to continue with our descriptive essays. If we were done with them, then we were to come up with topics for our informative essay. I honestly had a very hard time coming up with something to write about. I browsed through the internet to get some sort of inspiration on what to write and decided that I'd write about the causes of Diabetes. Let's hope that writing about it won't be as hard as coming up with the topic!

September 13, 2010

Today, we talked about how to start a thesis statement and started on our narrative essay. I decided to stick to my original topic "Seven Wonders of the Ancient World". I was researching the seven locations during class and they were all very interesting, my favorite is the Great Pyramids of Giza. So, I hope to start my essay tonight. Hope I'll do okay "Crossing Fingers" :D well until next time..

09-13-2010

Today we went through Thesis statement and Controlling idea as a class. It informed us many points in helping us write a great informative essay. I thought it was very helpful. I'm actually very excited to start on my new essay about "Driving Under the Influence." I hope it gives many good points out to those who commit such behavior. At the same time, I'm learning many new laws I didn't know about and statistics that were way beyond my knowledge.

paper #1...almost done...9/13/2010

Today we read as a class about Thesis Statements and Controlling Ideas. Some of us continued our essays and some are already starting on the next one. I am not quite done with my first essay. Every time I read it, I want to change something and then when I change it I end up adding more to it. I think I’m going to do one last revision then I’m going to finalize it. Other than that, today’s class is going by pretty fast. Oh and I need to start thinking about my topic for the next paper.

09-13-10

Second Essay?, Man, I haven't done with first one. Can't think straight right now. I probably have to go home, and do some research about what topic am I going to choose. I just need to find something about something. It's been a long day, well actually, it's been a long couple of weeks. I've been very busy with work and wasn't really thinking about any class works. Well I hope Dr. Rivera doesn't make us to choose the topic before we leave, cause I have no clue.

9/13/10

Today, we discussed thesis statements, controlling ideas, and organizing & developing support. I chose a topic for the informative essay, started on my first draft wrote about one and a half pages already. So I'd have to say today's class session was a success. The only thing that was a downfall is that my keyboard has slowed me down. I have to keep pressing letters down twice to make sure it types the letter that I want. So I decided to finish the rest of my essay at home.

2nd Essay Topic

Today, we went through some of the things that you need to preform when you write an informative essay. We also learn about writing and controlling ideas, thesis, and strategies. I think it's great i am actually getting the concept in writing. I wish I had more time to remember everything. well that's about it for the day, with the exception of working on our second essay.

Mondaay...

What we did in class today is we discussed the Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support and now were deciding on what topic to choose for our next essay. What topic did you choose? haha. i didnt choose mine yet, but im still researching! hopefully i'll choose a topic before next class starts. Goshh, sitting in this side is freezing! Well until next time, take care (:

number 7

Today, some students got caught checking there facebooks. It was pretty funny. "We are supposed to be doing our work, not Facebook". HAHA! If you are reading this blog, don't get caught next time. "minus 10" for you! haha! Roads are slippery when wet. take care

Missed one day of class and i feel lost! However, i found out we started a new type of essay (informative). We read about thesis statement and possible strategies. First things first, turn in my descriptive essay, and then think of a topic for the informative essay we started on. Help! hehe..

What we did today

We discussed about writing process. Then we start to do our 2nd essay draft. Overall the class was good.

More lessons

Today we learned ... Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support.
We read about how to control how we write, now we are left doing our second essays and our blogs.

Second Essay

I am debating with myself if i should write a informative essay about the drinking age law that was recently pass by Guam government. I do not know if I should go pro for the new drinking age since I do believe that the new law is a bit redundant but then again the new law has its own benefit. suggestion to which one will be very much appreciated

Class was good, im just about done with the first essay. just a few corrections that need to be fixed. still undecided for my next topic.

Today I finished up my descriptive essay. I wasn't here the last class meeting, so I was a little bit lost. It feels like its been forever since I've been here! Camarin checked my essay for me when i finished. Thanks Camarin! Hopefully when i get back my essay from Dr. Rivera, I won't have to make TOO much changes. Crossing my fingers!

Essay Continued...9/8/2010

Today I just continued write and edit my essay. Since I wasn't able to come to class last week. I did my editing on just on word. But I mostly did more writing today adding on to my essay. I also think that time went really fast in tonights class. Other than that I hope to finish this essay tonight so that I can have it revised one more time before I submit it as my final paper. Class was GREAT tonight!

September 08, 2010

Today, we discussed run on sentence. Thankfully I didn't have any on my final draft. Anyways, we discussed how to correct run on sentences and how to distinguish them on our essays. Also, we received our final edit from Dr. Rivera I had a couple of errors but "I am done". Now I can start on my Informative essay, I choose to write about the Seven Wonders of The Ancient World. Well until next time..

Editing Essay's

Today I edited someone's essay. I found out that editing isn't that easy. I hope that some could give me advice on how to use the correct punctuation, so I could be a better writer.

One Of Those Days

Everything I did for the whole day went to the bottom of my feet then and dragged me down to hell. For this class, i left my USB to the lab and i hope my friend kept it safe for me. If not then I'm doomed! I got to rewrite everything to scratch.

Today, we discussed run-on sentences. We also were told we can choose an informative essay topic, and I finished up my descriptive essay draft. Class felt like it went by a little fast today. But, that was probably just me.

Another long day of class

Today was pretty alright, pretty boring too. Haha. Well today i just surfed the internet looking for my next topic for the informative essay and no luck. Too many too topics to choose from and it's giving me a headache. Oh well, i still have a lot of time looking for a topic so until laters, Esta!

number 6

It's our 6th class meeting today. It's hot outside, cold inside, do you agree? If your reading this blog, how do you like the class so far? Let me know! HAHA! I think this class is pretty alright. Thank you for reading my blog. Drive safe if your driving. Ride safe if your riding. Haha!

Wednesday

Today, I had a partner proof read my essay. I rushed through the essay and made quite a few mistakes. My partner did pretty good to me. Now, I just need to fix all the errors I made, to finalize my paper. Next, we need to choose another topic, for our informative essay next week.

Tonight was fun the class went very nice we talked about the work we will be doing in the coming months .I can't wait to get started writing is fun if you know how to put the words in the place. oh yeah spelling helps.

Part Two "Peer Editing" :D

Today, was part two of editing our descriptive essay drafts.  We all paired up with our partners and "peer edited", thankfully I had only a couple of grammatical errors. But, you'll never know! Dr. Rivera will be editing our "peer edits" and will find out next class if we did really well.  Till next class.. :D

Today wasn't bad, we went over some common mistakes people make in writing. After that, we continued on essay. I did edit some but don't know if I edited right or not. I'm pretty sure, there's going to be tons of mistakes. I guess, that's why I'm here to learn.

Wednesday (cose)

Today Dr. Rivera went through some of the common mistakes that people make in grammar.
Some of it seem a bit confusing but after I read it a couple of times I think I will catch on. Also we did some editing on our essay. I was getting a little frustrated, because I wasn't sure if I made the correction, correct.

Another Day

Dr. Rivera discussed the newly posted things that can help us in our essay. I think it will be a big help because I think I did not do a good job on my essay. I must try harder to make myself better on this class.

5th day.

First day of September!!! Haha I just had to say it. We finished our draft 3 today and emailed it to Dr. Rivera. Or should I say we are supposed to be done with our draft 3 today so we can send it to Dr. Rivera and she can revise it. Haha either way, I hope I get a good feed back on mine. :) Have a good weekend guys!

Class today was good, although i must say it is freezing in here atleast to me it is, dont get me wrong i love it when i rains, but only while im home, not out and about. i like this class and i enjoy doing the essay. even though im off on alot of commas, periods etc. its a learning process.

number 5!!

Today is a rainy day. I brought a jacket with me, because I think its cold. Like my last blog, I did say it was cold in this class. HAHA! I feel like having some hot chocolate on this rainy slow day. Would you like to have some with me? :)
Todays class felt like last class. I worked on my last draft to turn it in to Dr. Rivera. GIVE ME AN +A PLEASE! HINT HINT** haha! Just joking. This is my blog. Have a Good Morning when you wake up. haha! The End.

Another cold day of class

Today we reviewed the common mistakes in writing and how to avoid making tricky choices while writing. Then we revised our essays and when we were done correcting it we sent it to our teacher. Well, thats it for today until then, latersss! Im freezing in this class right now.

alright here it goes

Well today i had a stressful day at work don't want to talk about because it's stupid. Anyways i got to work on my essay at work.I plugged in my last paragraphs. Then i had my classmate check it and found a mistake. so i did the correction and emailed it to Dr. Rivera. hoping its all good...

Day 5

Day 5 here in EN-100w-11. What we did today was, We Discuss the Common Mistakes of English Grammar, Mechanics, and Punctuation. Then We continue to edit our drafts. Overall the class is all good.

Another day with mother nature.

For the past few nights I have been spending it awake. Sleep really late and go in and out of sleep the next day. I am not too sure if it is because of the amount of stress that has been placed over me or it is the weather. The mornings are shinnier then ever and nights are the complete opposite. Except for today, today Mother Nature decided to make up her mind and let it rain all day. For my fear of getting into a car crash, which by the way I nearly got into so many on the way here. I layed in bed deciding if I should attend class or not. But some phobia's I have to say does not count as an excuse. (Giggles) So I'm here now blogging in class. We learned about Common Mistakes in Writing, (giggles) something I sure know so much about, well I sure do a lot of it anyway. So with the link that our professor has provided to us, I can now sound a little bit smarter with the help of it. (giggles) Well as soon as I get use to it. Well bloggers until another entry ... Adios!

By the way, did anyone feel the earthquake this morning? It felt like someone pushed my bed and left before I could wake up to see who it was. What a tease, mother nature can do better!

Tonite was fun the class has a easy comfortable feeling still working on my essay and still more improvement needed ,but you known what they say try try again right